Out of all the editing so far to include Hearts of Stone/Blood & Wine, this section is probably the biggest mess so far.

"head inside and talk to the Jonas the Innkeep" If you talk with him after the Wake, you can ask about Hjalmar plans. But it won't advance related quest.

"Head back east along the docks" Head back west (if you are near the signpost).

"Follow Yennefer to the next bunch of attendees, including Birna, Holger Blackhand, and Svanrige an Tuirseach, where you’ll discuss Skellige traditional funeral customs, and Holger will express his dislike for Birna." I don't have this part in my walkthrough, straight to the Jarls.

"The King is Dead - Long Live the King (Level 16)" I assumed this part must be after "Ermions Lab" because you can't leave the palace if you not follow the main quest.

"Now that you’re all dolled up for Yennefer, it’s time to get messy!"

The subquest is failed at this moment. You must dolled up before you start a cutscene with Brina, if I'm not mistaken.